Plot hole and consistency critique of your story
Paste your outline or draft and get a tough, organized critique of plot holes, motivation gaps, timeline errors and unpaid setups.
Transform your draft into a new voice, genre or point of view while keeping the events, with notes on what changed.
Rewrite the passage below in a different style without changing what happens.
Target style: {{style}}
Point of view and tense: {{pov}}
Keep: {{keep}}
Length: {{length}} the original
Passage:
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Instructions:
- Preserve all plot events, character names and key facts. Change diction, sentence rhythm, imagery, level of detail and attitude of the narrator to fit the target style.
- Embody the style through craft choices (syntax, imagery, pacing). Do not name it in the text or imitate any specific author's actual sentences.
- Avoid parody unless I asked for it.
- Give me the rewrite first.
- Then add a short "What changed" list of 4 bullets covering sentence length, word choice, imagery and perspective, so I can learn the technique.
- Finish with one sentence on a line you think I should keep from the original and why.Describing the style by its effects rather than by author names gives a more original result. Ask for a second pass in a contrasting style to compare the two.
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